Great Job Jeremy! You did very well on your first post. But, you didn't put A, B, C, D, etc. and numbers on the picture. Also, the answeres are right. But what do you mean by 1= 300m? You should put Rectangle= 300m squared and so on. Overall, gret job on your first post! :)
Nice Job Jeremy! I like how you put a picture, but next time you should put a link and a video so we can understand more of it. Instead of just saying the answers, (try not to use yellow) you should put how you got the answers. Good Job on your first post! (:
Good job Jeremy, I like how you changed the color of important words. You should of labeled the shape ABCDEF... Next time you should try and find a video and or link. You should explain how you got your answers. But overall good job on your first scribe post.
Great job Jeremy, I liked the way you made some important words different colour but try not to use yellow next time. try to say how you got your answer and find video or a link. It seems like you were in a hurry but thats okay, and you did great on everything else.
Good job on your first scribe Jeremy, I like the picture but you could have made it larger and labelled it. Next time you should add a video and a link. And also don't use yellow.
Great job on your blog Jeremy, Everything is good but maybe you could make your picture a little larger and maybe even labelled it. When you put the colours just be sure for next time to make a more clear colour than yellow. And also for next time try to add a video or a link, but great start Jeremy.
Great job Jeremy! I knew what you were trying to say when you were explaining the answers for the questions. However, I couldn't really see what the yellow word said unless I looked down on my screen. But I respect that you were creative. I think you should've focused on aligning the parallelogram more in the corners. (But I didn't think that you really needed to, because we understand where you were getting at.) You could have labeled the vertices, and the shapes we had to answer for each question. Also, you could've titled the answers. For example: "Answers Question A (area): Parallelogram= Question B (perimeter): Parallelogram=". However, overall I think that you did a very good job. Great start! (I liked how you made the image in colour.)
Good Job Jeremy. Next time you should space it out, so it'll be more easier to read. Next time try to find a video or link to help others out . First Posts are usually the hardest, keep up the good work :D
Good job Jeremy. It was very neat and I could understand it. Maybe next time you could put a link and a video. I liked how you used coloring on only the important words. Well I hope you take my suggestions to heart.
Great Job Jeremy! You did very well on your first post. But, you didn't put A, B, C, D, etc. and numbers on the picture. Also, the answeres are right. But what do you mean by 1= 300m? You should put Rectangle= 300m squared and so on. Overall, gret job on your first post! :)
ReplyDeleteGood job Jeremy! You did a good job on your first post. Next time try not to use the color yellow.
ReplyDeleteGood Job Jeremy. Great Job on the first post. Try and add a video and a link to make your post a little bit more bigger. But , great job !
ReplyDeleteNice Job Jeremy! I like how you put a picture, but next time you should put a link and a video so we can understand more of it. Instead of just saying the answers, (try not to use yellow) you should put how you got the answers.
ReplyDeleteGood Job on your first post! (:
Good job Jeremy,
ReplyDeleteI like how you changed the color of important words. You should of labeled the shape ABCDEF... Next time you should try and find a video and or link. You should explain how you got your answers. But overall good job on your first scribe post.
Great job Jeremy, I liked the way you made some important words different colour but try not to use yellow next time. try to say how you got your answer and find video or a link. It seems like you were in a hurry but thats okay, and you did great on everything else.
ReplyDeleteGood Job Jeremy, nice time try to make a better picture and a video. you also shouldn't use yellow as a font. but everything else was good.
ReplyDeleteGood job on your first scribe Jeremy, I like the picture but you could have made it larger and labelled it. Next time you should add a video and a link. And also don't use yellow.
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your blog Jeremy, Everything is good but maybe you could make your picture a little larger and maybe even labelled it. When you put the colours just be sure for next time to make a more clear colour than yellow. And also for next time try to add a video or a link, but great start Jeremy.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Jeremy! I knew what you were trying to say when you were explaining the answers for the questions. However, I couldn't really see what the yellow word said unless I looked down on my screen. But I respect that you were creative. I think you should've focused on aligning the parallelogram more in the corners. (But I didn't think that you really needed to, because we understand where you were getting at.) You could have labeled the vertices, and the shapes we had to answer for each question. Also, you could've titled the answers. For example:
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Question A (area): Parallelogram=
Question B (perimeter): Parallelogram=". However, overall I think that you did a very good job. Great start! (I liked how you made the image in colour.)
Good job Jeremy but you did not have any link or videos but still good job.
ReplyDeleteGood job jeremy but there is no link or video and next time label the picture. but good job overall for your first post!
ReplyDeleteGreat Job!But try to find a video and label them too.But the rest are alright!Just make sure you keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteGood job Jeremy, your blog was very short but was good for your first try. You could have gave us a link or maybe even a video.
ReplyDeleteWell Jeremy i think you could have added to that.
ReplyDeleteGood Job Jeremy.
ReplyDeleteNext time you should space it out, so it'll be more easier to read.
Next time try to find a video or link to help others out .
First Posts are usually the hardest, keep up the good work :D
Good job Jeremy. It was very neat and I could understand it. Maybe next time you could put a link and a video. I liked how you used coloring on only the important words. Well I hope you take my suggestions to heart.
ReplyDeleteGood job Jeremy. I like the picture you put. It's better if you put a video or a link, but good job.
ReplyDeleteGood job Jeremy, i liked the photos that you used and the exspresion in colors ! Very nice work.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Jeremy! The picture is great and the words are clear but try to put a link to a website or an video.
ReplyDeleteGood Job jermey like you pictue lot of the information but next tiem put a line and a video. :D
ReplyDeleteGood Job Jeremy. Great Job on the first post and you put in a good picture too.
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